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Broken bonds, New ties

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“SAKURA! SAKURA? WAKE UP!!”

Slowly Sakura lifted her head off the soft pillow to look at the clock sitting by her bed.

6:00 AM.  Crap. She had slept in.

“SAKURA! YOU BETTER GET OUT OF THAT BED BEFORE I MAKE YOU!!”

God damn it Ino had a loud voice. Almost as bad as Naruto’s. Almost.

“SAKURA? DID’JA HEAR ME?”

“YES INO-PIG!!”

“Oh ok HURRY UP!”

Ugh, today was her day off, and Ino was bound to have some plans made up. Ino and she had become very close since……she sighed……..since Sasuke had left. How long had it been? 3 no wait…4 years?

Sakura drudgingly got herself out of bed and picked up the first clothes she could see. She put on a white pleated skirt and a red tank with the Haruno sign on the side. Then she tried (keyword: Tried) to straighten out her bubble-gum pink hair. She had kept it short since it was more convenient (and long hair reminded her of her days as a mindless Sasuke fan girl). She looked straight in the mirror at her jade colored eyes before deciding that this was as good as she was going to get.
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“God she’s taking he time!”

“Ino calm down, I’m sure she’s on her way out.”

“Whatever Tenten, we have a schedule to keep to! And where’s Temari?! Didn’t she say she’d come with us?? Plus we have a LOT of shopping to do before the dance, and I need some new outfits! Mine are getting old!!”
She looked down at her current outfit, a cream colored sweater that was off the shoulders with straps and skinny jeans. To complete the outfit black pumps. And her hair was kept in the usual high ponytail.

“Oh come on Ino they’re only six months old!”

“Tenten! They’re SO out of style!!”

“Well my clothes are two years old!”

“Seriously? They’re antiques!!”

Ino looked over Tenten’s outfit, definitely out of style. It was an orange tank with a red sweater on top, straight cut jeans and sneakers.

“INO THEY’RE NOT TH-“

“Hey guys sorry I’m late!”

They both turned around to see Temari walking up to them.

Ino instantly looked over her outfit as well. It was a rocker tee and black skinny jeans, pretty simple but she was on a visit so you couldn’t blame her.

“Glad you could make it Temari!”

“Thanks Tenten, Shikamaru’s on a mission, so I didn’t really have any other plans. Say where’s Hinata?”

“On a date.”

“Really? Is it Naruto?”

“Naruto? No, its Kiba, he asked her out last night.”

“Really? That’s sweet.”

Then they heard the door creak open.

“Hi guys, sorry about that, I was up late last night studying and….”

“You and your studying! I’m Sick of it!! Let’s do something fun for a change!”
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“Sakura, do you think this’ll look cute on me?”

Sakura stared at the purple dress Ino was now wearing. It was a deep shade of purple, long with a train and strapless. It also hugged her every curve perfectly (in an elegant way).

“You look cut in anything Ino.”

“Thanks Sakura!!” Ino said as she hugged her pink haired friend.

“Whaddya think? Will Neji like it?”

Sakura turned to see Tenten, who had just emerged from a dressing room. She was wearing a short light green dress, sleeveless with a collar and a chunky brown belt.

“Wow Tenten, you look really good in green!”

“You think?”

“YES! Totally!”

“Not as good as I look!”

They all turned to see Temari. She wore a silver halter dress, with a triangle shaped hole cut out in the upper chest area that was covered with mesh. It also came with mesh shorts (kinda like what Temari usually wears)  and a mesh gauntlet.

“Wow” was all Sakura could say.

“D’ya think Shikamaru would get his lazy butt off a chair and dance with me if I wore this?”

“Yes! Most definitely!”

She gave a satisfied grin. Then Ino spoke to Sakura.

“Now, YOU need a dress!”
“What!? Why Me?!”

“Because you’re the only one without one!”

“So?! I might not even go to the dance! I don’t even have a date!”

“Is that what you’re worried about? Don’t worry; we could help you get one!”

“NO!”

“And why not? I’m sure there are some cute guys who would go with you!”

“I’m NOT going with anyone and that’s FINAL!”

“Fine, you can come alone; I don’t have an escort either…..yet.”

Then Ino grabbed Sakura’s hand and dragged her over to the dress rack.
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“ANOTHER BOWL OF RAMEN PLEASE!!!”

“Pig.”

“SHUT UP NEJI!!”

“Please my friends! Do not waste your springtime of youthfulness on anger and hate! Our youth only lasts so long!”

“Ya *munch* you guys *munch* instead of *munch* fighting *munch* you should be *munch* eating.”

“WELL I WAS EATING! UNTIL NEJI INTERRUPTED ME!! BELIEVE IT!!”

“I didn’t interrupt; I simply stated you eat like a pig.”

“THAT’S IT!!”

Naruto threw himself at Neji. Neji took a defensive stance. Rock Lee just stared in shock. Ayame hid under the counter. And Choji, well he just continued to eat his chips and watch the show.
All of a sudden, Naruto was thrown across the street. When he looked up he saw a very disappointed Kakashi looking down at him and Sai shaking his head.

“Naruto, you should know better then to attack fellow comrades.”

“*sigh* Yes, Kakashi-sir”

“And remember, Neji is on the ANBU black ops while you are still only a chunin. You should remember he is your superior.”

“Hey! You know I’m gonna make chunin then jonin in no time! Believe it!”

“Why do you always say that dickless?”

“HEY! I TOLD YOU SAI, NOT TO CALL ME THAT!!”

“You have Such a temper Naruto, control yourself.”

“Fine fine I will….Believe it!”

They continued to eat when Neji asked:

“Hey Naruto, who you asking to the dance?”

“Sakura-Chan! Believe it!”

“You Naruto are asking the lovely blossom Sakura to the dance?”

“Yup! Of course Lee!”

“Oh….well I was planning to ask her but since you are I shall ask my youthful teammate Tenten instead! *sticks thumb up Gai style* “

“WHAT?!”

Everyone turned, surprised to look at the now bright red ‘great Hyuuga genius’.

“Oh, I am sorry Neji, I did not know you were planning also, to ask our youthful teammate to the dance. My apologies.”

“Uh…er….ah….it’s….No I wasn’t!” Neji looked like a tomato by now, “ I was surprised, that’s all!” Damn pride he thought.

“Well then! I guess I will indeed ask Tenten to the dance then!”

“Looks like were both gonna have some awesome dates Lee! Believe it!”
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Ino watched as Sakura stared at herself in the mirror. Did she like the dress? Of course she did! Ino had picked it out for her after all!

But with that expression on her face it was hard to tell.

“So? What do you think??”

“Uh….”

“You love it. Don’t you?”

Ino was quite pleased with herself for picking it out. It had two spaghetti straps and was kind of like a corset in the front. The skirt was all ripped up and showed a healthy amount of leg. And the color! It was perfect. A kind of rose….no blood red.
She was sure to have at least someone to dance with.

“Um……”

Ino gave her the ‘don’t you say no’ look.

“Ya, I … love it.” Ino didn’t notice the fakeness in the smile Sakura was now giving her though.
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“So Ino, where to next?” Tenten asked.

“Well, I thought the jewelry store. Hmm……Then the shoe store! Oh then of course we’ll have to make appointments at the salon! And Oh my god! I almost forgot manicures!! We cannot forget manicures!! And of course we’ll have to….”

Tenten drifted into space. Sometimes Ino could go on like this forever. She would be glad when all this shopping was over and she could go on another mission with her ANBU black ops teammates.

Well, Neji especially. She was really hoping he would ask her to the dance. But he hadn’t, yet. So she wasn’t exactly sure of his feelings toward her, but it was Neji after all, it was hard to tell what he was thinking……

“Tenten? Tenten?!”

Tenten was abruptly shaken from her thoughts by Ino’s loud voice.

“C’mon Tenten we’re at the jewelry shop!”

“Ya…..ok”
Omg I know this sucks, it's my first fan fiction so constructive criticism is appreciated.

Also my friend highly suggested that I post this, I on the other hand think I should get some more experience writing.

And the I know the title is really bad but I couldn't come up with anything better.

The pairings are (or will be): Sasusaku, Naruino, Kibahina, Shikatem and Nejiten

Don't like them, don't bash them, I don't mind if you simply point out that you don't like them but you don't need to kill it for other people.

Chapter 2: [link]

Naruto(c) Masashi Kishimoto
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ruuku11's avatar
how do i write somthing like that